I recently received my contextual studies marks back and I’m fairly happy with the grade.
I agree with the feedback given, and I do need to be more conversational in my writing in the future, when listing out points of interest, however a lot of the bullet pointed lists were statements based upon the research I had done and felt it was better to list these points clearly.
I am pleased that I hit learning outcome 2 almost on the head, and I am happy with the feedback given, especially that my tutor has understood my point within the essay.
I do agree that I need to extend my reading beyond what I did, however I also looked at what I felt was necessary to get the point across at the time, a lot of this information is communicated across the internet rather than books or journals, however I’m sure if I looked hard enough I could find these sources.
SWOT analysis
Strengths:
cohesive writing and an interesting ‘out of the box’ topic
solid evidencing of my points
interest in the topic
Weaknesses
Lacking conversationality
lack of expanded researching horizons
Threats
Most information is on the internet these days, especially when in games design fields.
Time is always a threat.
Opportunities:
There’s a large library nearby, I should look there for source information
I can always look at ways of enhancing my essay writing.
Targets:
Look for more source material on physically based rendering and the limitations of it, this will be good to know as part of my chosen career.
look online for courses in enhancing essay writing and conversational writing skills
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